Archived Review
- Reviewer: Fairy
- Review date: 21st Feb 2009
Hey, i'm Fairy and i'll be reviewing your site in the latest version of Firefox and on Windows XP.
First Impression
To be honest, I find it really quite bland, though the frog in the corner is quite cute, as is the bird. The site name is adorable as well, but it's not in your actual URl, which may confuse visitors if they were to straight off type into the address bar as opposed to clicking on a button or link. The layout does seem professional, but I think more is needed to it due to the overwhelming sight of white!
About
This page is quite informative, but it seems too much text and I have a hard time reading it due to this. I'm not so sure about the three links going to the below sections as the page isn't too long, so they seem unecessary. I've only really seen them used on very long, formal documents before.
Stuff
Okay, well there's pretty much nothing on this page. I think before you open your site you should have most of your content up, because new visitors will probably forget to come back. If you had a lot of content, and it was high quality, they'd bookmark.
Links
Pretty standard, but I would suggest a full stop after "(a cleanup is going to take place when I stop procrastinating)". I like the link to Free Rice - it's always good to see sites helping out with important issues.
Tumblr
Okay, wow, I didn't expect to be taken to a completely different site, so you should warn visitors of this. Since it isn't your site, i'm not going to review it, but I don't think a place there, is too suitable.
Overall
Not a bad little site, but it is clear that a lot needs to be improved and added. So far, I can't really tell you much more than that as there isn't anything really on your site. I really would suggest not opening until, at least, 80% of the content is there as i'm sure it'll put visitors off.