Archived Review
- Reviewer: ocp
- Review date: 28th Feb 2010
Hello there! (:
My name is Ashley, and I will be reviewing your site!
Before I start, I would first lke to clear some things up:
I will be using internet Explorer while reviewing your site, with a size 1280 x 800 resolution! :)
So how about we get started?
Okay first of all I would like to start with the layout,
Personally I feel like you could have blended the images together better. All I see is that you slapped two images onto there, did some editing, and added text. Also the white on that grey is quite bright
Along with your links! Maybe try changing it to something that goes more with the images, or just keeping them as black?
Also you seem... sorta active. Your last post was two weeks ago. Really you should personally try to update atleast once a week. It shows that your site is more active!
Okay now lets move on:
Personally I don't like how when you click "Chatbox" And it goes to a completely different page! Why not keep it /on/ your site?
Okay in your content section, I don't really get the point of the ' Leave a <3 " ?
I don't really think that is nessasary...
Also I personally think you could have done a better job on the template. The images are stretched and I just don't like the colors that go with them. x3 Even though they aren't the layouts you will be using on the homepage of /your/ site, still try to make them look decent (:
Also for your website layouts, your layout one:
For the sidebar, it has a border around everything except for the left side?
Also it is so hard to read! Put a white background on it! (:
Website layout two:
It is so hard to read! Remember, even though these aren't the ones you will use for your homepage as said before, that doesn't mean you can't make it look good!
White doesn't go on bright things, as it is hard to read! So fix that up!
Website layout three:
Personally I just don't like this one. The brown makes the whole flower theme not pretty. I also don't like how everything is aligned.
I would say keep this, but edit it up. Get rid of the brown and make it prettier!
Maybe do white instead of brown.
Next I am not exactly sure what "Page Graphics" Are?
Can't you just say " Graphics "?
Reads:
Under your reviews, your book reviews link is like, overlapping the 'Reviews' header. I would fix that.
Other than that, I feel like your website could use some major improvement, and I don't really understand the reason for having comments at the bottom of each of the pages.
Other than that, good luck with your site! And I hope this helped a bit (: