Archived Review
- Reviewer: Diana
- Review date: 22nd Nov 2008
Oh, this layout is very nice. The only thing I would suggest is lowering the opacity on the texture in the content area, because it's a little too busy at the moment.
Well, okay, looking closer now, "only thing" has turned into two things. You see how the swirls change from blue to pink to yellow to green? I think the borders on the navigation should match that, if you know what I mean. Right now, it's more like blue to purple to peach to pink. I really hope you know what I mean.
But seriously, it's an awesome layout. I especially love the text for "Flickorian."
Good job!
Author
I like that you put a simple profile up there. I'm legitimately confused though, because you say you have two children, but it says five in the profile, and it doesn't mention that you are kidding (if you are) anywhere in the details.
"I am an Atheist but" should be I am an atheist, but. The comma and I don't think atheist should be capitalized :P Unless you follow Capital-A Atheism, which I just found through Google.
"...character from a book, Pinocchio will always rule." that comma should be a semi-colon (;).
The rest was good, but I kind of feel like it didn't tell me anything, you know? For example, you say "Im a realist, minimalistic individual with splashes of complication", but you don't explain why you feel that way about yourself.
Site
Good information here *thumbs up* I don't know, I feel I should warn you that there's no such thing as unlimited in web hosting, so um...be careful.
"I wanted something different. Not "wick the lindow" different..." even with the correction at the bottom of the page, I felt myself saying, "what?" Other than your Site page was good :D
Exits is organized, which is good.
Okay, that's it! I liked your site a lot. Keep up the good job!