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1. 

   conanpro gave it on 11th Apr 2009 and said:

   Hi! I'm Jamie. I will be doing your review in Google Crome on Windows with 1152 by 864 Screen resolution.

   The header is indeed to my liking but your color scheme is A bit cheesy.
   The Navigation and Network font are A little big, maybe tune-ing them down would be a Good Idea?

   Content:

   Your "Color Pallets" are well, But the slightest bit of low-quality is in the images.

   your "Emotions" are not the BEST I have ever seen But, they aren't Terrible.

   I really LOVE your icons but the Harry potter ones just look like all the same and there is SO many.

   When I look at photography I do REALLY like it but when I click, the Lightbox makes the square much bigger than the Image and its very hard to find the Exit button.

   I think "Website Extra's" is one of My favorite parts of content so far. Its nice to have this all in 1 section Instead of multiple pages!

   I started to read A little on the animal testing but I thought I was never going to finish ALL of these Articles. But these sound Decent enough.

   The project is neat and the Contest are fine...

   Your hostee looks pretty nice. And Other than that...

   I give you 4 stars. keep up the good work!

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   Becca's Response:

   hey thanks for the review.
   I'm glad you pointed out the errors but I'd've appriciated it if you'd let me know how I could've improved it.
   Thanks anyways :)

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   jj1 gave it on 10th Mar 2009 and said:

   I like the illustration and the colour scheme. Orange and purple shouldn't really go together but in this case they're quite striking. I also like the way you jump straight in to an interesting scenario ("What would I do if today was my last day?")and then follow this through.

   Generally, you wite very well and your site is interesting to read.

   Just minor points:

   1 "She went Fayes website and realised it ended in .piczo.com " - should be "she went to Faye's website".

   2 Personally, I would put the Blog before the Owner in the navigation - you have to make me interested in what you say before I will be interested in you as a person.

   Generally, you need to add more content but very well done!

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   Becca's Response:

   Thank you for the review.
   I'll change that error right away :)
   Personally (and other people must agree because it hasn't been mentioned elsewhere) I prefer the blog link at the bottom. You do read the blog first, in reality, because the blog is the homepage.
   Also, I'd rather it if you were more specific when you say 'more content' but thanks anyway :)

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   zai gave it on 5th Mar 2009 and said:

   Love love love the illustration. The header image = absolutely gorgeous. I don't like the sharp contrast of white text on orange though. I suggest that you make your container div (containing sidebar and content) the same width as that header image if it isn't already, making the background of this container div a lighter orange, and making the text black. Just to stick to conventions, because white text throws me off, and it would be better if it was a little bit more readable. The lighter orange div on top of the darker orange background would look nice I think, and bring the whole layout together.
   Also on your Visitor page the words 'Tutorials coming soon' just blends in with the background. Again, lightening the background of the container div would solve this problem.
   Wow I am from Essex too. I hardly come across anyone on the internet who lives near me :o Lol yes the stereotypes are so not true. Your about page is nicely written.
   Sorry I couldn't have written more; I'm in a rush right now. But keep up the good work xD

   UPDATED 05 Mar 09:
   Southend! :o how cool. I live in Chelmsford. we're practically neighbours, lol.

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   Becca's Response:

   Thanks for the review. I was planning on changing the white to black anyway so, yeah. :P
   It's the exact same width :) I had to because otherwise there'd be a yellow outline around the image and it'd ruin the horizontal background :P
   You're from Essex? Whey! I spoke to someone online then found out they live five minutes away from me! It was strange. Where abouts? I'm near Southend XD
   Thanks for the review :)

4. 

   Shadow gave it on 5th Mar 2009 and said:

   First Impression

   Beautiful scheme. Who knew that purple and orange can work so well? But I hate that your site name is so small compared to the other text on your header. It could have easily been missed.

   Also, the purple used for the links is pretty hard to read on the orange. It could be that it's just...there. Make your links pop more on your sidebar, especially your navigation. I'm also not 100% sure of the white used for the main text, but it's readable. But your layout is very cute regardless.

   Blog and Sidebar

   Both sides can use a bit more padding. It looks smushed on the sides. Your entry titles can have more padding itself. The text size is great, but I think that it would benefit from having more line height.

   Thank you for having a short sidebar. The one thing I might add is a link to your archives somewhere so it can be easy to find. Granted, it's at the bottom of the page, just chilling. But let it have more attention. Same thing with the feed link down there. A purple RSS button would look wicked among the orange! I don't get the whole ads thing; it's probably because I'm used to them being these flashy buttons. If you're going to have ads for other sites, use their real site name and make the links pop out more.

   The other pages

   Becca: You have the short version and the long version. That's fine. I never understood why some people, mostly girls your age puts their height and weight on their bio. I think that's no one's business, but at least you've omitted the weight part. It's useless information.

   "Stereotypes" shouldn't be capitalized here. But everything seems in order. I like longer bios. It gives me an idea of the general personality of a person.

   Onemoreline: Damn, even your site info is pretty lengthy. Not a problem though. I love this line.

   with the help of her good friend, and co-owner at the time, Susanna she learnt that css thing.

   Wow, that CSS thing. I loved that.

   Watch your spelling here. You have "surprise" misspelled here. In addition, be very careful with abreviations and acronyms. Use <acronym> for them.

   Your last layout pales in comparison to this one. Great job!

   Visitor: The text that says "tutorials coming soon" is very hard to read. Use the brown that you use in the links, or the white. Or, until it's up, leave it out altogether. It's seen in other instances as well, such as your photography page. Also, I hate link-only pages, but at least you have it organized somewhat, so I'll give you that.

   -The only color palette that appeals is the pink and gray. The green and yellow, unless it's put with darker colors, probably won't work, and the red/purple/gray combination clashes. Check out COLOURlovers for examples and create your own. I prefer if a scheme had 4-5 colors (maximum 5 colors), in case one of them doesn't work at all. Play around with it. It's not a complete loss--it just needs some work.

   -Your smilies are cute, but I'm worried they're kind of small. Make larger versions to these. Also, the preview with them all spaced out like that does them no justice.

   -You have no icons up yet. Until you get those up, don't put the link up.

   -Some of your photos are a little blurry, but they're still beautiful, especially the Eiffel Tower ones. And the graveyard ones are pretty, albeit creepy.

   -You have a few broken links in your website extras. This is all right, but I don't know the use of some of these. Some of those backgrounds would never go well with anything though.

   -In your articles, you should distinguish regular text (white) from the subtitles (white). Give your subtitles an effect so that it doesn't look like regular text. Your "Text Talk" article (which doesn't really constitute as an article) made me laugh, especially this one.

   ROFL - Rolling on the floor laughing. Well, if they say that, they're probably laughing like a loony or something. I doubt they are actually rolling around on the floor. Well, you never know I s'pose..

   I will admit that if I'm saying this, 60% of the time, I really am rolling on the floor. But it depends on the floor. The floor at my house, yes. The floor where I know rats poop on, no. Okay, enough non-sequitur.

   Oh and this:

   coz / cus - because. Is it really that much effort?

   I agree on that. Thank. You.

   Reviews: Oh, it goes to another site. I don't think it should be in the main navigation. It fooled the heck out of me, and since it doesn't open in a new window (kudos on that), and I have no warning that I'm clicking on an external link, I went out of your site.

   Coding

   Damn, 29 errors.

   -In XHTML, the "target" attribute is not used. They recommend not using that. Besides, who wants to be forced to open a new tab/window. This is where an image that says that this is an external link would work. Although, when put in sidebars, they may look sloppy. Use your discretion.

   -Ah! Tables! You're using it for your friend section. You can use divs for the same effect. I even saw a site that did it on the sidebar, so it is possible to do with sans tables. Tables are not for any part of a website layout.

   -You have an extra <p> tag in your entries. That's throwing an error as well.

   -Images in XHTML need an alt attribute, and an ending slash. <img src="blah.jpg" alt="" />

   When you look at those, you will knock off most, if not all of your errors.

   Other than the tables and the extra <p>, you have a great sense of coding. Just fix the errors.

   All in all...

   I enjoy your site. Your layout colors are gorgeous (who knew those colors would go well?!). The only thing that I don't really like is how the navigation (and the other links) are boring.

   I don't think there's anything major wrong here. Check your coding and watch the spelling on some of your pages. You have a few broken links here and there (mostly images), so look into those.

   And finally, get a feed button! That link on the bottom of the page isn't doing you any favors. Great job so far and good luck!

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   Becca's Response:

   Hey shadow :)
   Thanks for the review XD
   Yeah, the sitename on the header needs to be moved, I just don't want to make it look stolen "/
   I was actually thinking the same thing as you about the links before I read this review. I just don't know WHAT to do to make them more noticeable. I just put the height thing on there because it's a part of my appearance and, well, I felt like it really :P
   Weight is personal and pointless. :)
   Stereotypes is capitalised? Thanks for pointing that out, I hadn't noticed :)
   what does < acronym > do? I don't understand..
   The dodgy orange font (on the 'tutorials soon bit') is my bad. I typed instead of :P I'll change it asap.
   I hate the errors. 90% of them are because of fanupdate (the image ones and the ones that have twice, and I have no idea how to correct them :()
   Anyway, Thanks very much for the review and I'll work on fixing the complaints :)
   Xx

   UPDATED 05 Mar 09:
   Hey shadow :)
   Thanks for the review XD
   Yeah, the sitename on the header needs to be moved, I just don't want to make it look stolen "/
   I was actually thinking the same thing as you about the links before I read this review. I just don't know WHAT to do to make them more noticeable. I just put the height thing on there because it's a part of my appearance and, well, I felt like it really :P
   Weight is personal and pointless. :)
   Stereotypes is capitalised? Thanks for pointing that out, I hadn't noticed :)
   what does < acronym > do? I don't understand..
   The dodgy orange font (on the 'tutorials soon bit') is my bad. I typed instead of :P I'll change it asap.
   I hate the errors. 90% of them are because of fanupdate (the image ones and the ones that have twice, and I have no idea how to correct them :()
   Anyway, Thanks very much for the review and I'll work on fixing the complaints :)
   Xx

5. 

   Emileh gave it on 5th Mar 2009 and said:

   Becca, I think I might just review your new site. Because I love you and.. I dont know.. I'm sick and bored? That should be excuse enough, I do believe. (: And.. Erm, it's also in gratitude for helping me center my layout, and I will also be erecting a big statue of you for your help. So you know, and can tell me if you think I've made the nose too big. :D

   I was confused at first, I saw the words 'flying along' and was like.. NOOO THIS ISN'T FLYINGALONG!! But then I realised you were just quoting lyrics on the layout. I felt so silly. x) The birdie is so cute, and the brushes behind him are cute (I'm going to name him Jeffrey, and if you've already named him, tough, he's called Jeffrey now because I feel mean refferring to him as a him all the time). And I agree with you, the orange/purple combination is love (L) It's so pretty!

   NOW PAGES.
   Mmmm, paaaaaaaaaagesss. (:
   I love that picture of you! It's so cool! :D It's mint, it's like one of them you see in... erm... Places? I don't remember exactly where, but the point is I like the picture. :D I love the 'in a nutshell' and 'out of a nutshell' bits, I've never seen that before, it's so cool! I'd use it too, but that's stealing, I do believe. (; I'll just have to be creative and think of something like 'in a dinosaurs egg..' and 'out of a dinosaurs egg..' except less common.. Everyone loves dinosaurs. But I love them more. I was obsessed with them when I was like 5. I was obsessed with mummies and the Eqyptians and when they pull brains out of people's noses. I described that to my class in year one.. My teacher had to stop me.. ANYWAY, now I shall stop rambling off in different directions (I will again, just you watch me.. I'll rein myself in again though (;). I love your about me, you've got some straight up facts for the lazy people who cant be bothered to read your short novel (ha!) and some nice detailed bits for stalkers to get stuck into (no, I'm kidding about the stalker bit...). I like it (Y) And now when I'm done here I'm going to go and add some small facts for lazy people on my 'About Me' too.

   Next page! ONEMORELINE, (you should officially have the name in capitals. For EMPHASIS) and I will try not to write an essay about this one. But I think I didn't write an essay for the last one, the essay bit was when I went totally off topic ^^;
   Anyway, I love this page (no, seriously!) I love how you've written how you began like a story- I was definitely entertained by it! Well done to ye~
   Although, (FIRST NEGATIVE POINT ZOMG) I would not have all the links for this page on one line, with no divides between them. If I were you (which I'm not..) I would either add an &bull; between them all, or I would put them all on seperate lines, for the sake of avoiding confusion, and people being like.. WHY IS THIS PAGE FULL OF SO MANY DIFFERENT THINGS AND WHY ARE THEY ALL MENTIONED ON THE LINK.. oh, they're not.. :D

   Now, for VISITOR (these bits always get lengthy... aaaah!).
   Resources: While colour palettes are a nice idea, and the ones you have are nice indeed (I love how you've set them out), they're a pretty useless resource that not many people are going to take advantage of. Your emoticons are so cute! I couldn't spend so much time making a set of tiny smilies, then colouring them all differently and uploading them etc etc etc, it would take me years and I'd end up stabbing myself I'm sure, so well done to Becca! :D On your icons page, there are no icons.. I wonder if that's because you haven't gotten round to putting them up, or whether you simply haven't made them yet, but if there are no icons there then you probably shouldn't have a link up to the page. I love your photography, but the orange lettering under the title is impossible to see. I only noticed it because I accidentally highlighted the page! So, I would change that to a more readable colour to save confusion, and blindness (Imagine if you made someone go blind, Becca! I'd be disappointed in you forever! Now, that should be in incentive to change it). Your Website Extras page is a nice idea, but it is quite pointless. I hardly ever see Affiliate images used anymore, nor do I see pixel-fonted back, forward and new signs often anymore. And also, what talent does it show when you have made backgrounds that simply tile? Anyone can to them in MS Paint, and I know you can do so much more than that! So, I say, waste no more time on this, and get out and snap some more gorgeous pictures! Or write some more brilliant articles! Or go have picnics with teddy bears! (Teddy bear picnics FTW!)

   Next Section; Writing! I love these sections (Y)
   I really like your Animal Testing article, it was very inspirational, and you've most certainly done your research before spouting out meaningless opinions without reason. And I love the idea of alternatives! While I am completely neutral on the subject (I honestly couldn't care less, those animals were bred for testing and it's for the 'greater good' (as some weirdos would say), it's still animals that are recieving the treatment. This why I remain neutral. However, you have to realise that AFTER the animal testing stage, the chemicals are tested upon willing humans, so.. I forgot where I was going with that but yeah) I think that your ideas were very good and you're very passionate with the subject.
   I also love your 'text talk' article, it was very good! Though, I do believe there are phrases you missed off! (; It's a very good idea, and my gran could certainly do with reading it!

   I like your short story, it's really nice- and for want of not revealing anything I am not going to say anything more except, you're a brilliant writer.

   I'm at like 1050 words now, so I don't want to spam you with nonsense any longer.
   Your contest pages are really nice, I especially like the Scavenger Hunt one, I haven't seen that before, and it's a really nice idea.
   I can also see the WANTED unreadable orange text. GET RID. :p

   I have to say, I LOVE the reviews page, the layout is GORGEOUS. It's really really nice. I think when you get started properly with these I'll have to apply.

   1125 words, I'm proud to say the least.
   And, I also adore your site. You know that. (:
   So, I give you 4.5, just because of a few things that were a bit iffy. :D

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   Becca's Response:

   EMILY! I forgot you're on rev.iew.me. I'll rev.iew.you soon XD (cheesey much?)
   Haha. That dinosaur egg thing? I totally wish I could steal that. Haha, you spoke about Egyptian-mummyfying-techniques in year one? I'm slightly disturbed.
   Yeah, the unreadable orange font is where I've accidentaly labelled it < h3 > instead of < p > :P
   I'll get to it!
   I like my site story. I keep forgetting to put '|' inbetween the links. I was planning to, I swear on my friends chickens (yes, my friend is actually getting chickens)

   I officially cheated on the emoticons. (good ol' hue and saturation) They took about five minutes per smiley (to get all the colours :P) Was boring though "/
   Wooh! Teddy bears picnic. I have a teddy, he's called Edward. He's fouty five. He was my mums when she was born. I'm going to shut up about Edward now..

   Hehe, the 'friend on msn' who agreed with animal testing is actually you :P Remember when we had that huge discussion about it? Tehe, I felt mean naming names.. Hope you don't mind..
   Your gran SHOULD read it. :) Then again, my nan doesn't even know how to turn on a computer so unless she's a technogeek she'd need your help :P
   I'm reviewing your review here so I'll stop :)
   Thanks for the review :)
   loveyoux

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   Greykitty gave it on 5th Mar 2009 and said:

   My first impression the orange is too bright and contrasted against that dark purple. I think your navigation would look nicer if it were beneath the header and aligned horizontally, giving more space to your content column. I would also suggest making your links stand out more. The dark color you used for the links doesn't stand out like the white fond you used on the rest of the text. I'd suggest adding a background to your header texts. Maybe add a colored bar in the footer of your design to kind of complete the layout, closing off the bottom. I would move all the friends and family links to a seperate page, or if you really feel the need to include it in the layout put it in the footer of the page.

   I'd make a brighter hover over color for your links as well, maybe roll over to white. I like that the header font is a different face from the rest of the site. I also like the idea of the bird in the header. It looks nice. I'm just not really lliking the purple and orange theme. To me those are two colors that don't really fit that well.

   Just taking a glimpse at your coding and it looks pretty solid, so nothing to really say there. Nice work on that.

   Content time!

   I like how your about page is set up with that small snapshot of yourself inline with the other text. It looks good like this. I'm not too keen on the random colored words in the block of text. If you want to bold or underline text either make it just slightly different in color or just keep it white like the rest. There's too much contrast in your font color there.
   You have plenty of info about yourself and it's organised well enough.

   The site section is good, lots of history and info about the site and all that jazz. Maybe add any credits and links there?
   Then again that could just be saved for a separate links page.

   You seem to have a nice amount of visitor content. Some of it is pretty much stereotypical blog content though.

   I like photos, it's always nice to see them and often I find blog owners don't give enough attention to their photos. These are things that are very unique to each site since nobody's photography is the same. I think I would suggest making a bigger emphasis on your photos by making a separate page gallery for them on your navigtaion.

   No icons, hmm oh well, all I will add there is you should try to not link to pages that aren't up yet. Website graphics...they're ok but I've seen better. Color palettes are very common these days. I would almost suggest getting rid of most of these mini sections and just keep your photos.

   It's nice to see some articles, I would almost suggest opening up each article to commenting so people can always get more involved with the site and interact. It's also nice to see some contests, not too many sites do this.

   You need to move that link to reviews to a different section or specify that it leads to an offsite link, it breaks the flow of your pages. If you want to keep it there then I would suggest utilizing the same layout on both sections of your domain. That section has promise but there's nothing there to review at the moment. since I already reviewed your main layout and this is pretty much it's own little site I won't say much more on it.

   Overall your site is ok, the blog entries are nice, you have good ammounts of info about yourself. The content, eh it's nothing that would make me want to come back. The layout I think could be dressed up a bit more and I think that there is too much contrast in the colors. Purple and orange can work I guess, but I don't think those shades are really all that good together. You have good coding skills though. Your site is pretty nice, I think you could really try to build more on some more unique content, make your photos and writing stand out more than it does now, and drop the typical blog content.

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   Becca's Response:

   This has just given me a dilemma. Everybody's telling me to change the white to black and you're telling me the opposite? Argh "/
   Also, I like the colour combination. My previous layout was boring yellows and oranges and I wanted a more eye-catching one. I think the yellow and purple work well together, but each to their own opinion I suppose..
   Also, the "typical blog content" is there because people like it. If people didn't use it, it wouldn't be on every site would it? I know that makes me pretty un-unique, but it's a visitor-attraction so I'm happy keeping it to be honest. Besides, I'm not going to delete it after the effort I put into it.
   Thanks for the review, :)

7. 

   Peta gave it on 3rd Mar 2009 and said:

   First Impressions
   - I love your colours! They’re so bright and cheery, and I love the contrast between the two.
   - I like the way you’ve done the feathers on the wings. They look detailed enough for you to know they’re feathers, but it’s still simple enough to suit the rest of your layout.
   - Slight confusion when I saw flying along. It’s larger so I thought it was your site name. Maybe you could make your site name (which is kind of hidden at the bottom of the header) stand out a little more? Although I’m not sure how you would do that without making it look as though the two phrases were competing for attention. Hmm… Oh wait, I just saw your footer that says everything is copyright to onemoreline and flyingalong. Confusion.
   - White font doesn’t really work in terms of readability on the yellow background, although it’s nearly right in terms on font size. At least I think it is, it’s a little difficult to tell at the moment :P

   Coding
   Excellent, you have valid CSS! Now let’s take a gander at your XHTML. Uh oh, 29 errors. Although the majority of them seem to be easy fixes. You haven’t closed a few p tags, you need to add a ‘/’ at the end of your img tags to close them, add alt tags to your images and you’ve got some table code floating around in there. Apart from those little errors, good work. Your code looks great.

   Becca
   I like the way you’ve added your photo. The speech bubble is really cute. I enjoyed reading your ‘About Me’ and was very glad to see you didn’t just list everything. You have some good information there, and I think you write about yourself well.

   Onemoreline
   I don’t like the way you’ve done the links at the top of the page. If they had some sort of divide there they might work better, but I think a list is your best option. At the moment it looks a little messy.

   I like the way you’ve written your about me as a story. It’s something I haven’t seen before and made me feel like I wanted to keep reading. I see why you have flyingalong in your header now :P I remember how I used to feel about my friends finding my website. Have you thought about making password protected entries on very private stuff? That way you might not have to close up if the same thing were to happen again.

   Woops! I tried to go to your subsections but all had broken links except for affiliates. Are they under construction? If so remove the links.

   Visitor
   Resources
   Colour pallets – I’m not normally a fan of these, but I have to say I love the way you’ve presented them. It’s a really nifty idea.
   Emoticons – They’re pretty cute, but I think a light border around each emoticon would look nicer and make them look more finished.
   Icons – I don’t see anything? And the text isn’t links so I’m not sure what’s going on here.
   Your photography page is a broken link.
   Website Extras – There’s quite a lot here. I think your affiliate icons are nifty, I’ve never seen someone use them before but I think they’d look nice. Your backgrounds are pretty simple and I think there’s a little too much white on them. There’s nothing under bullets, button bases, quotes and lyrics or updates signs; maybe you could remove those sections until you have something to post there.

   Writing
   - I quite liked reading your article on animal testing. I liked how you gave a few points of interest from either side. I liked that you saved your opinion for the end of it. I think a bit of an expansion of the for and against side would make this article even better. Maybe link to some external sites for people if they wish to continue reading?
   - Your blogging tips are also quite good and exactly what I would expect form a good blog.
   - I would’ve loved your text talk article a few years ago when I had to attempt to decipher people who actually spoke like that on their website, but I’m not sure it’s necessary now.
   - I really enjoyed your short story. I thought it was well written and I really liked the subject matter, since I’m very against it. I liked the way you wrote as the person, describing their thoughts and the way they felt. I like stories that leave me guessing and I thought your ending suited the story perfectly. Good work.

   Contests
   - Your comment challenge is a good way to increase hits and get comments. I think it’s good you’ve explained the way your fanupdate works, maybe you can figure out a way to have a scoreboard so people can see who’s winning? :P
   - I like your icon competition, and I was thinking maybe when your photography section is up you can ask people to use your own images instead. You know, plug your content some more.
   - Is the winning layout for your layout competition going to be used? I think you should state what happens with the winning entries in all your competitions. Like do they get free advertising or something? There’s a type in this section, ‘…put icon in the subject line.’ Just change icon to layout and you’re all set.
   - Ooh! A Harry Potter competition. I think that’s a pretty cool theme for your photography contest, so great job on coming up with something unique.
   I don’t really like scavenger hunts, but mainly that’s because I’ve noticed that people have a tendency to put them on their graphics and then not remove the image after the contest is over. I do think they’re a good idea to get people going through your content though.
   - For your writing challenge, I feel like the setting and genre you have specified is a little too similar to the short story you have up currently. I guess I’m just thinking people might read your story and then give you something similar. Maybe give them two completely different ideas, like a Dark/Mystery genre set in a Circus Tent XD You know, something that really makes it interesting.

   Reviews
   Ah, I wasn’t expecting this to redirect to a subdomain. There’s nothing really there to review at the moment, so I’ll just skip this section.

   Conclusion
   I really like what you have so far. You have some very nice original content, and I think you’re doing great job. You maybe have too many site contests going on at the moment, but as long as you’re able to maintain them properly they shouldn’t be a problem. My only real gripes are with your font colour, broken links and empty sections, everything else is excellent. Great work :)

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   Becca's Response:

   wow. thank you, that was a really nice review. :)
   Thanks, yeah, I originally made that layout for my old site and I felt the lyric matched the bird. I didn't want to make it look stolen by changing the name :P
   Yeah, I know about the errors. Most of them are caused by fanupdate and I haven't figured how to fix it yet. I'm going to try and play around with it when I get time :)
   I forgot about those links on the onemoreline page. thanks for reminding me ;) It's a new site so I haven't got around to fixing them up :P As with the other broken links :)
   I actually based my writing challenge on the short story - I was going to link it as an example but never got around to it XD I like the circus tent idea ;p
   The reviews bit is co-owned by my friend Susanna so we're working on it together, sorry, I should mention that in the above bit.
   I don't know what's happening on the icon page, I'm sure I saved it after I added them. I'll check it out.

   Thanks for the review. I've almost written a review of your review here. Sorry, Thanks again.
   :)

   UPDATED 08 Mar 09:
   ERRORS FIXED! :) XHTML 1.0 STRICT! :)

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