My Friend Lola

My Friend Lola

**--- (Rated by 4 people, viewed by 105 people)

Best viewed in firefox. Everything was made by me. The portfolio isn't up yet.

Added by Sianay in Personal

My Friend Lola has 4 Reviews

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    Paige gave it ***-- on 26th Jun 2009 and said:

    Hello, I am Paige, and I will be making a review for your site (:.

    First Impressions: Nice, it isn't overly painful to the eyes, and MyFriendLola is a unique name. What is behind that name?

    Layout: Its nice how you used pictures of yourself (I believe), and not celebrity pictures. The colors in the layout are very cute. Now let's go to validation. In this layout you have 36 errors and 2 warnings. Most of your errors are just accidents, I think. They are " ...alt=""" " and ".. src="blahblah"" ". Those are easy fixes. Also, you used font size +3 for your links (its invalid), I suggest in your CSS you make a part called something like "a.navigation" so in your main page code, you can put class="navigation" inside the link.

    Sianay: It says "more" for the title. Is this a wrong link? Anyhow, I can't really review this because it's just words.

    Blog: Broken link. When you do have a blog I suggest using wordpress.

    More: Another broken link. Could you fix these?

    Conclusion: There isn't much good, or bad to say about your site. Just put some hard work into your site. I just want to point out something:
    - "Anyyyway" should be "anyway", spelling like that annoys me to some extent.

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    ohgasp gave it ****- on 26th Jun 2009 and said:

    Sianay, I don't know what happened, i guess we lost touch but, I love your site! You always have awesome graphics and great blogs. I'm sorry for the loss of your friend a while, back, and I know it still must be very hard. But anyways, your layouts are amazing and I love how you and your boyfriend are usually the site models for the current layout. You have a good style, and it's much different than other people's. :) Also, I'm very curious at where you get all your brushes, because they look so cute with your layouts! So my ending statement, you're a very hard worker and I think you deserve a lot of props! (:

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    Natalie gave it **--- on 10th May 2009 and said:

    Hiya. We used to be affies I believe :D

    Now, before I move on, I will let you know that I will not try to be mean at all. I will give constructive criticism. It seems that you don't take some criticism well from the previous review... Just don't eat me if you don't like the review :P

    First Impressions:

    When I come to your site... I notice that the header is a bit fuzzy in image quality. However it is a good size. I then notice that your text is tiny and the spacing just dosen't work. There is hardly and line spacing between the text at all. Please fix this because it hurts my eyes and looks messy. Also, maybe you should centre you layout as there is too much space to the right. Please look at this to see what I mean.

    Coding & CSS:

    As for your coding... *presses ctrl + u* Ah! There's no DOCTYPE, no body tags and the head tags aren't even closed. So I don't need to run it through the validator. But I will anyway... 213 Errors, 41 warnings. If you were to have less errors, then you would probably have-better cross browser compatability.

    CSS wise... It seems ok, apart from you missing a few semi-colons here and there. Just add them and you should be alright.

    Content:

    This counts more for points than coding and first impressions. But not by too much. Let's have a look... There's nothing in your portfolio. Not even a mention as to why. Hmm....

    Other than your blog and a little bit about you and the site, there's nothing much here :(

    I wanted to go back to the home page to check on your blog, but there is no way of getting there. So, opportunity missed for big points.

    Overall:

    All in all, I agree with Jeff. Work harder. I've seen you improve drastically and you can get better. I'd love to see some more stuff on the site (I know it's personal, but even some stuff in the portfolio could count), and perhaps a bigger font. I will come back later to see your reponse to this and I hope you take it well and let MyFriendLola.info improve.

    UPDATED 10 May 09:
    Ok. I'm glad you took the constructive criticism from me well.

    Oh and I won't be taking sides. Both Jeff and you say that one of you is in the wrong I will just stick to the reviewing side of things. Mini-Edramas can be interesting, but not fun to be involved in :P

    ....................

    OH AND I JUST REALISED I LEFT SOME THINGS OUT OF THE REVIEW...

    1) I notice now that you use cutenews. It is an unsafe script and I suggest you perhaps switch over to FanUpdate or Wordpress.

    2) A few Grammar mistakes. Be sure to capitalize your I's so the are not just like this: "and if i don't hear from them within..."

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    Sianay's Response:

    Thanks! Sorry lol, the only reason i got mad at Jeff is because me + him have issues. Constructive critisism is good, he's just a bully. Anyway thanks for the review! I'll fix it all asap! I've been super busy recently so it's basically been adding little bits of the site as i go along in my spare time. it'll soon get sorted. Thanks!

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    LaLaland gave it *---- on 10th May 2009 and said:

    Quick one .

    You really think I wouldn't do a review on you ?
    Your crazy ;)

    Mozilla FF / Windows XP
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    First Impression -

    Oh , no celebrity images ! This is kinda cute !

    Layout -

    I love this picture , I really don't know if this is JoshJosh

    Coding -

    CSS - Sianay Sianay Sianay , you allways talk about how "Un-professional" it is to have no valid anything , maybe you should take your own advice.

    XHTML - Holy errors , as you would say "Your site is 'Un-Professional'"

    Overall Comment -

    Work harder . :P

    UPDATED 10 May 09:
    I don't Cuber Bullie , she is mean to me (Shes 14 I'm 11 , she offered to buy me a domain , she bought it , and stole it from me , the domain name I have been thinking about for a year now )

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    Sianay's Response:

    You are full of crap jeff. Leave me aloneeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
    (before anybody thinks im saying this to a randomer, HE CYCBER BULLIES ME ON MSN).

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