Di Talento

Di Talento

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Di Talento is Italian for talented, just thought I should point that. I'm indeed far away from talented, but I liked the name. My site is mainly a resources site with some random blogs.

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    GrantMc gave it **--- on 15th Jul 2009 and said:

    I'm not a huge fan of the design of this site for a few reasons.

    1. Colour.
    The colours don't compliment each other and seem to send a cold negative feeling to the user not a great design. Maybe is the green was a more neon or electric green or it goes cold blue instead of having this dull green with a tinge of blue in it. It's not flattering.

    2. Typography
    The font type, size and spacing all seem wrong to me. None fit into the design and the word spacing in the sidebar is ridiculous all the words look like a unstyled tag cloud instead of sentences.

    This is overall a pretty uninspiring design and is extremely bland. I hope you can take this information in and I hope I'm being constructive in what I have expressed.

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    Shola gave it ****- on 14th Jul 2009 and said:

    I have visited your site before when looking for reviews but never applied.

    First impressions of your site are okay. It has a strong distinctive style. Maybe the font you use in the header could be improved but overall it's very cool. Only suggestion is changing the colour of your title of posts to a different colour, (maybe a darker blue?) to make it stand out more from the whole site. Also I like the organisation of it, plain, simple and easy. :)

    Your about my page is sweet and to the point. I like the "I’m really flattered that you took the time to read about me" bit, gives off a good impression.

    Just a few things you could do:
    With the "10 random things about me", "5 Things I don't believe in" may possibly be better in a different page? A sub page of about me?

    Also when you number then, you don't space after the numbers. It looks sloppy so just space after. So instead of:
    "2.I can speak 3 different languages."
    it'll be
    "2. I can speak 3 different languages."

    Your articles look very nice.
    Again, space after numbering though.
    Also why not have a "back" button at the end of your articles? just makes it's easier to return to the main archive of articles.

    Any improvements is basically to keep adding content.

    With your writing all I can say is with your comments at the end of it, try blockquote, or italics to differentiate between your creative writing and your own comments.

    With your tutorials I was kinda apprehensive, because most sites kinda have the same, but with your I was surprised? Swahili? Amazing. I know a bit of the language and was amazed at the idea of you doing tutorials on the actual language. Well done for such an original idea.

    Overall I like your site.
    Just think about those few changes. :]

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    ditalento's Response:

    Thanks, I will think about those changes, and again another thanks for pointing the grammar mistakes.

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    Erin gave it ****- on 14th Jul 2009 and said:

    Hi there! My name is Erin, and I'm going to be reviewing you today (obviously).

    FIRST IMPRESSIONS:
    Clean and neat design, legible text, colors are easy on the eyes. I could stay here and explore a bit.

    LAYOUT AND OVERALL DESIGN:
    I like the colors of your layout; blues and greens are my favorites, actually. The header seems to be lacking. While the background texture is nice, the text and the corner brushes don't seem to go. You used a kind of distressed text with a sort of floral brush, and they don't seem to belong together on this cool wavy backdrop. Try to go for a more cohesive design. Since the header is the first thing a visitor sees, it ought to make sense, at least.

    I would also like to point out that the order of the text on the header can be confusing. One might think that "Living in Misery" is the site name, not "Di Talento," since most people naturally read English from left to right. I know that I frequently arrive at others' sites by clicking on their name in an affiliates list, so I know the owner's name, not the site name.

    Other than that, everything is organized, and the colors go well together.

    HOME/BLOG:
    In the welcome message on your sidebar, you have a sentence fragment in between two complete sentences. I don't know if you meant to do that, but if you not, you could easily rectify that by changing it to this: "Welcome to Di Talento, a personal..."

    I am reading your latest blog, "A good bye, perhaps?" I'm not going to tell you what to write about (this one was interesting enough for me), but I am a spelling Nazi and a grammar cop - if you use any language as a form of communication, then you ought to use it well! Since English isn't your first language, I'm going to try to help you out a lot!

    There should be a comma after "Okay," the very first word.

    "Planing" should be "planning." Yes, both are words, but you mean the one with the double N (both times you used it).

    "i'm" should have a capital I.

    In your third paragraph, you have lots of comma splices, which is when multiple independent clauses (phrases that could stand alone as a complete sentence) are incorrectly separated by a comma. There are many ways to fix this, so I'll just point out the errors and link you to a guide that can help you correct them.

    1. "Next Saturday, I’ll be going away for Umrah, click on that link and you’ll know what does it mean." (I would also change "what does it mean" to "what it means" for less awkward phraseology.)

    2. "and that leaves me one week, then I’ll go back to school"

    3. "I don’t know how will I be able to go to school all over again, I’m still not getting this “School is coming, so excited! I’ll see my friends!” feeling that normal people get, I’ll probably never get it, I need a hug."

    Here is a guide to combining sentences: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/598/01/

    While I understand what you mean, it can get very confusing for other readers when the grammar is not very good. It can make your blog posts hard to follow. I'm sure you want people to understand you, right?

    OWNER:
    - About Me:
    I enjoyed reading this section. You gave enough information so I can have an idea of who you are, which is good. I also would like to be a poet, though not as my primary career.

    Onto some grammar issues...
    Paragraph 1: There should be a comma after "well" and after "October 14th." There are a few comma splices: "Well my name is Sophia, I’m a Muslim female and proud, I was born on October 14th 1993; that means I’m 15 years old." and "I’m from United Arab Emirates, I was raised in a religious house filled with 4 annoying siblings (3 sisters and 1 brother)."

    I would suggest changing the first one to "Well, my name is Sophia, and I'm a proud Muslim female. I was born on October 14th, 1993; that means I'm 15 years old." The second one you can easily fix by adding "and" after the comma.

    Paragraph 2: "Between" should be "among," since the first is reserved for a comparison of two people, and there are five of you total. The phraseology is awkward in some of these sentences. For instance, in the first sentence, "I’m spoiled and selfish as people claim," reads strangely, and I think that can be helped simply by rearranging the words: "People claim I'm spoiled and selfish."

    In the following sentence, "I tend to think a lot and ask a lot of questions about the subject I’m thinking of, that people sometimes get really annoyed," I'm not quite sure exactly what you mean. I understand, but the second part, "that people sometimes get really annoyed," is awkward. I think you mean either you think a lot so much that people get annoyed, or you think a lot so people get annoyed. Although the meanings are quite similar, there are slight differences. It's best to be as precise as possible if you can.

    One comma splice: "I’m spoiled and selfish as people claim, I can explain for the spoiled part; I’m the youngest between all my siblings, but for the selfish part I’m still working on that." My suggestion would be to write, "People claim I'm spoiled and selfish, and I can explain the spoiled part: I'm the youngest among all my siblings. As for the selfish part, I'm still working on that."

    Paragraph 3: "Over come" should be one word: "overcome."

    There should be a greater space between the third and fourth paragraphs, instead of just a single line break.

    Paragraph 4: One comma splice: "The closest person to my heart is my mother, after that comes my best friend Amna who is my sister, though she can be a pain sometimes and she’s not a good secret keeper." The phrasing when you write about your sister is also kind of odd; some rearranging of words would be useful here. For instance, you could write this: "The closest person to my heart is my mother. After that comes Amna, my best friend and sister, though she can be a pain sometimes, and she's not a good secret keeper." I suggest adding a comma after "Rasha" as well.

    Paragraph 5: The second sentence is a fragment; removing "since" would make it a complete sentence. I would also add a comma after "Arabic literature." The last big sentence is also a comma splice, which could written as follows: "However, people nowadays are vandalizing it. I’m not claiming I’m really good at Arabic literature; it’s a hard language. But I can at least..." And yes, you are allowed to start sentences with conjunctions.

    Paragraph 6: The last sentence is a comma splice, too: "I won’t claim I’m unique or “hard to find”, I’m just Sophia."

    - 10 Random Facts About Me:
    These are interesting. Since this is a list, it would make more sense to display it using an ordered list (<ol>). #1 and #5 are comma splices, and in #10, there should be a comma after "a lot."

    - 5 Things I Don't Believe In:
    Care to explain why you don't believe in any of these? Just listing them doesn't give us any insight, and most people have complicated reasons for the way they feel about these topics. Also, like the previous list, using a list instead of paragraphs to separate each point makes more sense.

    - Contact:
    Good to have. Perhaps you should display this in a list, too, but unlike the others, I think an unordered list (<ul>) would be better.

    ARTICLES:
    - 5 Top Rules in Web Designing:
    These are some basic guidelines here, nothing out of the ordinary. Why is there only a single line break between the two paragraphs in #4? Instead of <br />, just make to paragraphs. Why not display this in an ordered list, too? That's what it is, after all.

    - Cracked Versions of Adobe Photoshop
    Oh good! I'm glad you acknowledge that using these versions is stealing! It's a shame that people seem to think it's okay to get it for free illegally, just because they can't afford it.

    Why is your <em> white? I have to highlight the text to read it. You should definitely change that because white text on a white background doesn't work.

    Also, why do you separate your paragraphs with three line breaks (<br />) instead of just using paragraphs (<p>)?

    Some grammar issues:
    "Photo Shop" is one word, "Photoshop."

    There should be a comma after "By agreeing and downloading the cracked version."

    Comma splices:

    1. "However, many of us who didn’t have that kind of money headed for the cracked version of Photo Shop, by cracked version I mean unauthorized version which is theft, an action that could lead to jail." The two clauses are incorrectly separated by a comma between "Photo Shop" and "by." Also, I recommend that you add a comma after "by cracked version."

    2. "Still that seems okay for most of the web designers, in fact the number of theft is increasing a lot."

    3. "Adobe Photo Shop is the result of hard work probably over years from the Adobe company, of course Adobe has to pay for its employers and machines etc."

    4. "Also the Adobe company has to gain profit too, that’s why Adobe asks $999 for it’s product."

    5. "Adobe has to decrease the price for its product, that way more people will buy it and less will steal."

    6. "I recommend those of us who don’t have that kind of money to pay for a web designing program to use GIMP, you can find tutorials here to help you adjust with GIMP and you’ll see that GIMP is just as good as Photo Shop with a few differences." You should also add a comma after "to help you adjust with GIMP" and change "with" to "to."

    - It's Okay to Be Cold:
    I completely agree with your point about apologizing. Why say sorry when you didn't do anything wrong? It should be the bad friend apologizing, not you. This is a good article; I'm sick of reading people say they're sorry when they shouldn't, too.

    Grammar/spelling:
    Paragraph 2 - I believe the term is typically "affiliate clean-outs," instead of "affiliates clean out." There should also be a comma after "now and then." Also, "trys" should be spelled "tries," and "those kind of affiliates" would be more correct as either "that kind of affiliate" or "those kinds of affiliates."

    Paragraph 3 - Instead of a semicolon after "real affilites," a colon (:) would be more appropriate, and I suggest adding a noun afterward, such as "people," so it would read as "real affiliates: people who comment..." Twitter is also a proper noun, so it should be capitalized.

    Paragraph 4 - A comma splice: "Sometimes people deserve what they get, at least now it will make them think why they were deleted and start being good affiliates."

    Paragraph 5 - A comma splice: "I had many careless affiliates, I even had affiliates..." Also, the rest of that sentence has a few errors. Change "all I did was keeping in touch" to "all I did was keep in touch," and "out dated" is one word. Also, you should add a comma after "outdated blogs" and another one after "fall for one."

    - Swimchick.net Fever:
    I don't understand the whole SC phenomenon, either. Some creativity can really go a long way.

    Paragraph 1: "I can’t count the number of sites I’ve been to that had Swimchick’s link in their credits page, I also can’t count the amount of visitors Swimchick.net gets and another thing I can’t count is Swimchick’s copiers all over the internet" is a comma splice, and there should be a comma after "visitors Swimchick.net gets."

    Paragraph 2: "So all of the other sites decided copying is much of a better idea, I mean getting inspired is one thing and copying is another" is a comma splice.

    Paragraph 3: "With out" should be one word. "I remember Swimchick not long ago having a CSS layout with out any header image, and not long from that I saw other sites having the same layout Swimchick had but with different colors and claiming “they’re too lazy or busy to make a good layout”, then why did you make a new layout in the first place?" is a comma splice; separate it properly where "then why did you..." starts.

    Paragraph 4: The phrasing of this sentence - "This Swimchick fever is a serious issue not only Swimchick became out dated but all the other sites look alike!" is awkward, and as it stands, it is also a comma splice.

    "Not only copying someone’s hard work is a crime but being just another copy is horrible, why would some one want to go to your copied site while they can go to a million other sites just like yours!" is also a comma splice; the incorrect separation occurs at "horrible, why." I recommend you change the sentence to this: "Not only is copying someone's hard work a crime, but being just another copy is horrible. Why would someone want to go...[finish the rest]."

    Another comma splice - "Originality is what makes people go to your site, It makes your site interesting and fun to visit, and all the visitors will be drooling to see your next update." Just change the comma before "It makes" to a period. There should also be a comma after "a simple line is okay" in the next sentence.

    Paragraph 5: There should be a comma after "Oh wait." Also, "Everybody has a creative side the only thing people need is to get in touch with it!" is a run=on sentence. The clauses need to be separated between "side" and "the."

    - Oh, no! I'm a Piczo site!
    It really is a shame how the misguided actions of some Piczo site owners has expanded to create the stereotype that ALL Piczo sites are composed of stolen content. I'm glad that you point out that not everyone on Piczo falls under that umbrella.

    Paragraph 1: You don't need the comma after "company."

    Paragraph 2: The phrasing of the second sentence is awkward. I suggest you change it to this: "Those bad sites have owners who steal from other bigger sites who are not hosted by Piczo (ex:domains and sub domains), and redistribute other people’s work." You should also add a comma between "bad sites" and "though."

    Paragraph 4: I would change "though" to "but" or "yet" (and add a comma before it, since it is a conjunction linking two independent clauses, while "though" typically links a dependent clause to the main clause.

    Paragraph 5: Add a space after the semicolon.

    - Why Cheat?
    Yes! As an aspiring teacher, this is a great article! Academic integrity for the win!

    Why do you have two headings on this page that say the same thing? Did you mean to do that?

    Anyway, in the top section, you can remove that colon; it's not necessary (and it's actually incorrectly used, because neither of the phrases around it are complete sentences).

    Paragraph 2, bottom section: All incidents of "collage" should be "college." Watch out for that; you used the right word a couple times, so these are clearly typos.

    Paragraph 4: This entire paragraph is a run-on sentence, consisting of two comma splices. Try to re-punctuate so that each thought is separated correctly.

    - Gossip Kills:
    Oh yay, another morally good article! :)

    Paragraph 1: Add a space before the first parenthesis.

    Paragraph 2: The punctuation is a little off in the second sentence. Remove the comma after "Though," remove "but," and add a comma after "even lower."

    Paragraph 3: The second sentence is a fragment, but that error can be fixed by changing the period at the end of the first sentence to a comma, and making "While" lowercase.

    Paragraph 4: Remove the "it" after "unfortunately" and add a comma after "days." In the next sentence, add a comma after "gossiping," and change that "your" to "you're." Also, add a comma after "morals."

    - Good Friends:
    I like your definition of a friend! Sometimes it's hard to get the right words to describe a person who is so good! Just a note that the last sentence of your definition is a comma splice, and you should change the semicolon after "let's read other people's opinions" to a colon.

    Opinions:
    I won't bother with other's opinions since they're quotes, but I'll hop to the last paragraph in the section. "That’s okay, having a real friend nowadays is somewhat impossible, in fact if you find a one real friend in your whole life you’re considered to be lucky" is a comma splice. In the next sentence, there should be a comma after each usage of "no." The comma after "money" needs to be changed, as this makes that sentence a comma splice, too... I would just use a dash here (–), a more informal punctuation mark (that I probably overuse). A couple sentences later, "now a days" should be one word, like you had previously in the paragraph.

    10 signs that indicates you having a fake friend: Change "indicates" to "indicate" and "having" to "have."

    #2. Change "pretend" to "pretends."

    #4. "Weather" should be "whether."

    #8. "Occurred" should be "occurs," to keep tenses consistent.

    #9. "Real" should be changed to "really," since it's describing another adjective, so you need to use an adverb.

    At the end, remove the first "number" in the sentence; it's unnecessary.

    RESOURCES:
    - Brushes:
    I like that you have previews in a Lightbox-esque format, but for some reason the brush album claims to have 6 images, when there are only 3 (and I sat around waiting for the odd numbered ones to load and realized it was an error). What format are the brushes in? I don't want to download them myself and unzip them to find out. It would be a good idea to mention this at the beginning of the page.

    There's not much selection right now, but you can always expand. I can't tell if the first swirl brush is just one brush in the preview, or is actually several different ones? I haven't seen brushes like the second ones before, and I'm not quite sure how useful some of them would be. Then again, I'm not much of a brush person anymore, so perhaps I just wouldn't think of any ideas. The text brushes just look like text of one of your poems, nothing fancy about the way the text is arranged or anything.

    - Container Templates:
    Nothing special about these. They're just simple layout bases (as they're supposed to be, I know), but none of them have any unique setups that might set you apart from any of the other people who offer blank templates.

    - Desktop Wallpapers:
    I really like the ballerina wallpaper! I think it's really pretty, and I could totally see someone using it. The butterfly one is kind of nice; it's calm and simple. I'm not fond of the brown and green ones. To me, they're just a crazy mish-mash of brushes and are way too busy. You should offer other sizes, too, since many other screen resolutions are common nowadays in addition to 1024x768 and 800x600. According to W3 Schools, in January 2009. only 4% of users had an 800x600 resolution, 36% had 1024x768, and 57% had a higher resolution. Clearly, the trend is that people are going for the bigger resolutions.

    - Wordpress Themes:
    The previews don't work, so it's hard for me to critique them. What's the difference between the first and second one? The screenshots look exactly the same to me.

    - Icons:
    The animated ones animate way too quickly, so it's annoying me just having them on my screen for a few seconds. Frankly, I don't see anybody using these. The messages on them aren't very interesting or creative, and on some of them, the backgrounds aren't very appealing, either. I think you can do better work than this.

    - Textures:
    I'm not much of a texture person, so I don't know how to judge these in terms of usability. However, several of them just seem to be slight variations of a similar swirl. Try to add more variety here.

    - Photography:
    Aw, your nephew is so cute! These are great shots. However, are these really visitor content? Why would other people want to use photos of your nephew? That seems kind of creepy!

    I like the photos of the beach, too. These are all really good.

    REVIEWS:
    I won't be reviewing your reviews because, well, that would be strange.

    WRITINGS:
    You spelled "writings" wrong in the heading. There should only be one T. I also won't review your writings since we all have a unique writing style, and I know I don't like people telling me how to write!

    TUTORIALS:
    Swahili tutorials! Didn't expect to see that. That's certainly unique. I can't tell you how useful these are because I'd have to try and study it somewhat seriously to learn anything, but I'll comment briefly on anything that sticks out to me.

    - Swahili tutorial part 1:
    Why is there a random line break after the first parenthesis when you're listing the countries where Swahili is spoken?

    There does not need to be a comma after "new language" in the second paragraph, and in the third, the first sentence is another run-on sentence. Punctuate after "alphabets" (which does not need to be plural) to separate the sentences properly.

    It's good that you have a sort of pronunciation key. Those are pretty much essential to learning another language, I think. I once opened my friend's German book and couldn't find the pronunciation key, so I made everything up. I learned about one word.

    - Swahili tutorial part 2:
    Add a space after "part 2" before the parentheses.

    The introductory sentence is kind of contradictory. If Swahili had the same grammar rules as English, then there wouldn't be any differences! Perhaps it would be better to say it has similar rules.

    Make sure to put a space before any parenthetical phrase, instead of jutting the first parenthesis up against the word before it. That seems to be a trend whenever you use parentheses; you don't seem to put that space!

    Anyway, these simple verb tutorials seem straightforward enough.

    - Swahili tutorial part 3:
    We haven't learned any subjects yet, so I'm kind of confused! Is "ni" the word for "I"?

    The simple past tense is... the simple past tense in English, too. The example you gave is not simple present tense in English, as you claimed it was. "I cleaned" would be simple past tense.

    WEBSITE:
    I recommend that you put some of the information on the subpages onto this page instead. There's no reason for us to click extra links if you could just put some of the information right here (e.g. site history).

    - Affiliates:
    A list of your affiliates, not too much to say here. You spelled "shockwave" wrong in Allie's URL, though. I also suggest that you organize these into a list (<ul>) instead of using line breaks.

    - Credits:
    Glad to see it. I also recommend using a list to organize this.

    - Site History:
    "I was originally heading for “immaturely geniune”, luckily my host snapped me out of it!" is a comma splice. You should capitalize "immaturely genuine," since it was going to be a title.

    You have an extra O in "too" in the first sentence of The Long Journey.

    "...I made a new site called 44graphix, it was a site builder and it was a graphic designing site." This is a comma splice, too. Capitalize "smooches-x," a title of your old site. A later sentence is also a comma splice: "So I decided to have a fresh start and move to a sub domain with Olivia, she was and she’s still a great host who just made it easier for me to understand ftp." Also, FTP should be capitalized. And this is many a comma splice: "After that, I decided to get hosted with Ashley, she helped me a lot with wordpress, and she responds to my emails quickly, she’s a great host." And "wordpress" should be capitalized as well.

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    OVERALL:
    I enjoyed looking through your website, Sophia. I know it may seem like I thought everything was awful because of the grammar, but all that aside, your articles were an enjoyable read. Those are the highlight of your website, and I think you should add more! Play to your strengths. From my observations, it seems to me you are much more creative when it comes to writing than graphic design, and quality is more important than quantity.

    With this in mind, since the written aspect of your site is so dominant, that's why I emphasized your grammar so much. I think the articles are the best part of your website, and bad grammar can be a distraction or lead to confusion. Your main problem was with commas; you seemed to enjoy using them to separate independent clauses (expressions that could stand alone as a simple sentence), which is not allowed in English grammar! That is the dreaded comma splice that I mentioned so often. I understand that Arabic is your first language, so it's totally natural if you get tripped up at times with another language. I'm just trying to help you communicate the best you can with the language your website uses.

    The link I included earlier about separating clauses goes to the Online Writing Lab at Purdue University, which I think is a really good resource. Browse through any of the grammar and mechanics pages if anything else in particular is giving you trouble. We all need a little grammar help at times!

    I also mentioned a few times that you could better display any of your lists with an actual list, so here are a couple links to help you with that: http://www.w3schools.com/html/html_lists.asp and http://www.tutorialtastic.co.uk/tutorial/customising_the_unordered_list_tag.

    You also had an unconventional way of separating your paragraphs. Instead of using the actual <p> for paragraph tag, you were using line breaks (<br />). I think your pages will have a more uniform look to them if each paragraph is actually a paragraph, and everything would look neater since some paragraphs won't have three line breaks between them while others only have one, for example.

    Anyway, this is very long now, and I hope this was helpful to you! I know I talked a LOT about grammar, but I really think correcting your grammar would go long way for you, since your website is heavily writing-based.

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    ditalento's Response:

    Hey Erin, yes I know I have many spelling issues, I'm trying to work on that and like you said English isn't my first language but I find it much easier than Arabic. Thanks for the links, I really needed those and actually I'm glad you pointed out all the grammar mistakes. And aw 3 and a half stars?! I was a bit heart since I took your review seriously since you really put effort on it and I can see you're not one of those who review sites with no experience.

  4. waynekp gave it ***-- on 11th Jul 2009 and said:

    After looking at your site, I have found that I do have a few comments and maybe even suggestions.

    I like the focus on the big image at the top it is kind of different. The downside is that it doesn't allow for much of your post to be seen without scrolling down and enticing me to read some of it. I understand that is a contradiction and not helpful, but no matter what you do there will always be someone to agree and disagree. With these reviews, you will find that many people are overly critical and you have to do what you feel is best.

    I think that one improvement that I would like to see in the site is to remove the large sections of blue on the sides. I think the site would look better, and as though it actually contains more if the centre part were expanded to fill the whole page.

    I do have a few suggestions for your content as well. In your most recent post, you spend a large amount of time talking about your issues with your father and the internet, and I am not sure that he would appreciate you ranting about that on a website for the world to see. On my site, I tend to avoid airing the negative things that happen every once in awhile with my family and friends out of respect for them. Another thing to bear in mind, is that to draw people to your site, you need to convince them that you provide something of value to them - ideas, opinions or information.

    Overall, I think your site looks pretty good, and it seems to be fairly well written. Not too many spelling mistakes. Make sure you keep adding content. One of the most important aspects of a successful blog is building momentum.

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    ditalento's Response:

    Thanks a lot of the review. I know what you mean about my blog, but sometimes I have some really hard days, and I blog about it so I can feel comfortable but on the expense of others, I'll try not to do that.

  5. zippycart gave it **--- on 11th Jul 2009 and said:

    Here we go with the usual bullet point style review

    - the resolution seems to be way too small and the big image heading takes up way too much space pushing all of your valuable content lower below the fold.

    - the header image is not that appealing but I do like the logo design however it seems to get washed out a bit .

    - the site seems to be a wierd hybrid of things that I do not what to do with. Not sure what to get out of the site.

    - affiliate section is odd and I do not know if that is more of a blog roll type of thing or what that is.

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    ditalento's Response:

    Thanks really for the review, but that didn't help me one bit, as you just pointed out the bad stuff without any suggestions. And that's a really small review.

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