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reeshas gave it
on 13th Apr 2010 and said:pages
the first page of the site is so unique(ly) different, the design is so beatiful. i really like this site already. the colors are calm and simple, the background is a prefect fit for this sweet kitchen. i don't know what Esperia means but i'm sure i'll find out.(hope..for what?) your young but mature, and a cancer like me, shy but outgoing where you need to be. orange is super bright and an attention grabber, you sure you're like that because you sound shy and smart. i like how you have open comments and feedback from viewers, its nice to know that the admin here gives a care of what others think of their stuff. and the submissions page is equally nice because your not like THIS IS ALL MINE! no you welcoming others to submit and add on to the site. it just too N.I.C.E!impression
this is a wonderful and cute site, one of the far amazing ones i've seen on here, really shows your dedicated and speak your mind because i read that period and parents blog, so honest, spilling out of your mind directly to your fingers and onto the screen. and no errors, i normally don't care about writing errors on personal sites or blog but here still its so well written. the entire site is clean, fresh, organized, titled and labeled, credited and resourced down to every image. this shows you truely love this site and nothing in this world can keep you away from filling it up with your thoughts. i'm sure as you get older and mature, the design will change, but your ideas will stay the same, like naming your kids certain names.overall
even though the design isn't yours, you've done a brilliant job making it feel like it belongs to you, it was made for you and your journal. just never stop writing, i don't know but maybe you have a gift for this and you seem to be enjoying yourself, so enjoy on! I LOVED EVERY BIT OF THIS SITE! <3 your too good and pure to be human, you must be some undercover angel! overall, the site is wonderfully crafted!errors none :P
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lizzy12's Response:
I would prefer honest reviews so they can help me-not a suck up response.
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ocp gave it
on 16th Mar 2010 and said:Hello there! (:
My name is Ashley, and I will be reviewing your site!
Before I start, I would first lke to clear some things up:
I will be using internet Explorer while reviewing your site, with a size 1280 x 800 resolution! :)
So how about we get started?Okay first of all I would like to start with the layout,
Okay well I don't particuarlly like how boring the top of your layout is.
I like how you did it notebook style, for the content && sidebar bellow, but the top part of the layout just ruins it. I feel like your site title ( Esperia ) could have been a bit more.. jazzed up? Its just sitting there, boring.
Also I don't like how the links are just floating under the "Ramblings of a teenager writer", and I also don't like the border on the top and bottom. I feel like if you had just done the five links /directly above the content and sidebar and made the text size big and left out the borders,
it would have looked a lot better. Maybe on your next layout consider making it a bit more appealing? However, this layout odes look to me like a premade layout, so if so maybe try to make your own layout, or even request a custom made one from another site? :)Next, I don't like how all of your blogs just go down the page, maybe consider putting one or two on one page? And the rest sent to archive?
It looks a lot nicer if you don't have a TON of posts just going straight down the page.Side note:
Your pages take a LONG time to load. And to be honest, I am not all that patient, and not all are. So maybe consider looking into that?Content;
You are a good writer!
The only thing that bugs me is the whole "Post a comment?" at the bottom of every page. I mean, I guess it isn't /that bad when you have it on the actual writing pages themselves, but what I don't like is how you put it on.. well for example: the poem splash page at the bottom you have a 'Post a comment?' thing. I don't really why someone would need to post a comment on a splash page? I mean... are they commenting on the links? Er the names of the poems? I would say if you need those comment things at all, just keep them on the actual /writing pages themselves, not the splash pages.
[Also if you don't call them splash pages... I am referring to the pages where you click 'poems' and it shows you the different names of the poems you can read]Overall:
Your site isn't that bad! I just think you need some things here and there, to spice it up and make it more interesting, as said in the review above, some could find it a bit boring.
But other than that, I can tell you have put a lot of work towards this site, and I wish you the best of luck! (:Using MSIE on Windows | Report This?
lizzy12's Response:
Thanks ! I appreciate your help. The post a comment thing is automatic but I will deff. change that. I see your point :)
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gryshco gave it
on 1st Mar 2010 and said:ESPERIA
LAYOUT
The layout is very clean and simple. It is also very professional looking. However, it reminds me of one of the Wordpress themes being offered online for free. Is this one of those? Or is it based on it? I found the link of the webdesigner down below. The sidebar is a bit too short but then it is better than having so many things going on in it. :)CONTENT
Home> This page leads to your blog posts. Your posts are very interesting. Correct grammar and all. I like the way you placed questions for the readers to answer after the post. I think it would promote more interaction in your site if you put questions in every blog post. I also like the blue circle where the number of comments are indicated.
Submissions> Ah, a great page where your visitors can request any writing or photograph. This is pretty rare for me. I rarely see submissions and notebooks pages. Maybe because I have so little friends who are into writing poems and such. Unique, for me that is :)
About Liz> This page simple tells you a basic information of who you are. Sometimes it is great to keep in short but meaningful. Just by reading this, I can easily understand what kind of person you are. :)
Notebooks> I assume this are the visitor contents for your guests. I didn't bother cecking each one of them. The fact that you have something to offer is good enough.
The Site> So this is were I found out that your site is still underconstruction. That is good though. Atleast, this review might help you a bit on how to improve your site.CONCLUSION
Your site is very interesting for a blog. You are very good in writing and your website is very educational. When I say educational, I meant your readers learn a lot about writing and it helps improves our English grammar as well. But I think it needs more improvement. Some may find it boring as there are very few interaction between the reader and the writer. Keep up the good work my friend :pIt was nice reviewing your site ^_^
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lizzy12's Response:
Thanks for the review ! Somehow I've gotten visitors to come back, it's not graphic based like most sites. I don't want to waste my time making things for people who don't give a crap about me. Instead, I write for me and if others want to read it they can !
Thanks again!
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