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on 30th Jul 2010 and said:Hello! My name's Christine, I am currently using a PC that runs window vista, with a resolution of 1280x800. I use Google Chrome to browse the web :)
First Impression:
-Your header is quite big, it shouldn't take up more than 20% of the page, makes the viewers scroll down quite a bit upon loading and re-loading.Layout:
The Navigation links stand out a lot more than your site name, not only because they appear first, it's because they are the same size, colour, and font. i suggest next time, making these links horizontal list, instead of a vertical list, and prehaps making them a different colour and size. Other than that, I think your layout is really cute! A nice colour scheme, and layout. The content and sidebar just really confuse me, because the titles for the content area is aligned to the right, it should be aligned to the left because you have a sidebar on the right, and it makes it seem like its suppose to be a part of it.-About page
Your links look like this:
About Allison About Angela Link Back Credits ContactI suggest adding "|" in between them, so they are differentiated. It will then look like:
About Allison | About Angela | Link Back | Credits | ContactA lot better, right? :)
-Resources
You have a section under "resources" called "resources". Which is kind of strange. Instead of having your visitor content be called "Resources" it should be something like "Goodies" or "Visitor Content", because tutorials aren't resources, and having a sub section named the same thing doesn't make sense.When clicking on your resources sub section, the list of content looks like this:
Brushes [7]
Collages [6]
Color Schemes [17]
Icon Textures [13]
Magazine Stock [11]
Patterns [6]
Photography [10]
PNGs [2]
Site Names [40]
Stock Images [5]I suggest making it into a un-ordered list. It indents it a bit, and adds bullets. Makes it look a lot nicer, and is a lot more tidy.
You can do this by adding <ul> at the top of the list, and </ul> at the end. Each link should look something like this:
<li><a href="YOURLINK" title="">Link name</a>[#]</li>
That's all i have to suggest for you now :) Hopefully your site will grow, and more people will review your site. It's nice to see a site that is run by a mother and her daughter. For now, it's a good start.
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moxiegirl's Response:
Thanks, Christine. (:
This was my first site/layout, etc. to ever make, rather like a guinea pig, so your advice is extremely helpful for the future.-Allison
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